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steven germain's avatar

This was my favorite part: “ I wasn’t quite sure how to play it. I didn’t want to be like “how dare you” because I like to think of myself as pervert tolerant, but I wasn’t feeling it as either audience or participant, so I just got up and left. But not in a way as to shame him, I just stood, stretched a bit, made like I had steamed enough and moseyed out.”

I like visual of you stretching, making like you had stretched enough... the key being "making like" which, to me, kind of sneaks in the otherness / separateness / identity / authenticity / intimacy / fear (whatever you want to call it) that your roving eyeball narrative captures.

Plus, another Tommy tattoo worthy addition to my collection: “I wasn’t quite sure how to play it”. Nice..

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Deirdre Lewis's avatar

I think the better tattoo is "pervert tolerant"

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Tommy Swerdlow's avatar

hey Marc, thanks for the shout out, and reading my action and being generous and all that other good shit. I just read your piece on meeting your wife on the train platform, and as a cat who grew up in late 70s NYC it hit me just right. Subscribed to your substack, just don't send Myles to Duke

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Patris's avatar

Wow I enjoyed this. What a walk. Beginning to end a travelogue of images so broad they tip repeatedly into the endearing.

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Tommy Swerdlow's avatar

i like the idea tipping into endearing. much better than leaping for it. Thanks Patrice

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Marc Typo's avatar

Damn, this is so good. This is the laugh I needed!

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David Darmstaedter's avatar

I had that same silver haired self-yanker, stroking himself in front of me at Beverly Hills Hot springs a few years ago; standing thigh deep in the water less than five feet away. I also practiced pervert tolerance, gradually looking away before I exited. I was gonna say 'I turned the other cheek' but that wouldn't have gone over too well in that situation. Great writing Tommy. Fucking loved it -

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Holly Starley's avatar

“Full on suds-nuts, they shammy away for ten minutes or more, merengueing themselves, frothing and frappeeing until they are five to six feet of whip cream and a dash of pubic hair”! Oh my gosh, I’m glad I found this. So many gems here.

A terrifically told glimpse into a space I’ll likely not see. And fun to compare it to the Korean all women spas I love.

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Patris's avatar

Don’t downplay a well planned “leap”, kid.

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Tommy Swerdlow's avatar

thank you. i got to stop trying to

play it so damn cool!

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Patris's avatar

You’re pretty cool already

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